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Thursday, 15 September 2011

Writing (the person that i admire)

15 September 2011,
dear FACEBOOK,

the person that I admire is Mohd Khairul b. Salleh.he is my boyfriend.he always make me smile.sometimes he make me laugh like crazy girl.sometimes he make me angry like angry bird.sometime he buy for me chocolates because he know i'm chocolate addict.his mother can make sarawak cake..chocolate cake also she can make..my boyfriend is very handSOME..her lips is so sexy.he has a curl hair with a thin body like a stick.I'm more clever then him.he has bought for me an angry bird.I put the angry bird at my handphone.every time i look at the angry bird, i will remember him..we always hang-out together when we had a free time.

p/s: practise make perfect..;)

2 BeBeLaN:

ika~~ said...

hye dear..
first,awk kna tau 'subject verb agreement'.singular (he) verb kena ada 's' (makes).cthnya, he always makes me smile.plural (we) xperlu ada s dkt verb.jgn lupa juge 'a,an,the'.penting utk every noun.meh akak betulkan:

the person that I admire is Mohd Khairul b. Salleh.he is my boyfriend.he always makes me smile.sometimes he makes me laugh like a crazy girl.sometimes he makes me angry like an angry bird.sometime he buys for me chocolates because he knows i'm a chocolate addict.his mother can make sarawak's cakes and chocolate cakes.my boyfriend is very handSOME..his lips are so sexy.he has curly hair with a thin body like a stick.I'm more clever than him.he bought me an angry bird.I put the angry bird at my handphone.every time i look at the angry bird, i will remember him..we always hang-out together when we have free time.

FarihaH d'SITU dan d'SINI said...

@ akak ika;

thankz akak..farihah dah faham dah..;)